perfectworry: she was still young not yet highly strung which you need to be when you get older (crystal splinters city skies)
李杏 | Frances J., a lion-hearted girl ([personal profile] perfectworry) wrote in [personal profile] love_poetess 2013-04-21 02:54 am (UTC)

This is really cute, although I don't know enough about your 'verse to figure out who the queen is supposed to be. I really like how Edward says he'll be the Queen, because everyone listens to his mother and nobody listens to his father. He seems like a sweet kid, a little precocious and still mastering the art of tact. I hope he keeps his flexible ideas about gender when he grows up.

(This is [livejournal.com profile] meepalicious here from [livejournal.com profile] writerverse.)

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